The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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The bar graph displays the
number
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of families in the United States by their yearly
income
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for the years 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, five various-
income
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income
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households
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showed a fluctuation trend in the years 2007, 2011 and 2015. Despite more than 100 thousand
income
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household was lower than the household earning with less than 25 thousand and below 50 thousand, in the
last
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recorded year it recovered to be the highest among other categories. In 2007, earning less than $25,000, just above 25,000 but under 50,000 and between 50,000 to 74,999 families at around 25 to nearly 30
million
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. Earning less than $25,000 and earning less than $50,000 yearly
income
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families increased significantly to 28
million
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and 29.5
million
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in 2011, overtaking earning more than the
number
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of earning $100,000
households
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.
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, in 2015 earning more than 0.1 billion rose from around 5
million
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to around 33
million
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had the greatest
number
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of
households
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. The amount of household earnings was less than $74,999 and less than $99,999 throughout the three years was relatively stable. People earning less than $74,999 saw a slight increase in 2011 and
then
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slightly recovered to the
number
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of
households
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in 2007. A
family
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family's
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earnings of less than $99,999 declined from around 1
million
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to 8
million
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in 2011
,
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and, finally
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finally
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, increased more than
initially
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, income, households, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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