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Band 5.5

our landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him. In your letter, you should tell: why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased what you will do if it is increased.

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Dear Landlord,
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 letter is regarding the asking
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 a hike in the rent. I believe that the charges must not rise in any situation.
Firstly
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, the agreement states that if the landlord wants to increase the rent, they are required to inform the tenants with written notice
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at least six months prior to the month the landlord wants to raise the lease.
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,
this
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 unit is not renovated and does not have all the amenities against which you are asking for the price of rent.
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,the water leakage problem
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 still not addressed as requested two weeks
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, if the tariff gets increased against the lease agreement,
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 will file
this
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 matter to ORT (office of Rental Tenancy).
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, the case will be held and
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 will request the court for compensation
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 the immediate uprise in the payment charges or else we will vacate the unit once the decision is made the following month. I hope you find a way that can work for both of us mutually.
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 sincerely, Tenant

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coherence and cohesion
Consider structuring your letter into clearer paragraphs with specific topics to enhance flow.
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Ensure correct usage of articles and prepositions for better grammatical accuracy.
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Try to use a more formal tone and phrasing to match the context of communication with a landlord.
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You clearly state your position on the rent increase and back it up with valid points.
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Your intention to resolve the matter is commendable, showing respect and willingness to communicate.
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