The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks fo the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks fo the building industry.
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The provided diagram illustrates how
bricks
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for the building industry are manufactured through different stages of
producing
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the production
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process.
overall
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, producing
bricks
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for the building industry can be divided into seven stages starting from digging clay, mixing ingredients, moulding, drying,
cooling
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and cooling
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to delivering
at the end
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of the process. During the first stage, clay is excavated by
digger
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a digger
the digger
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. The clay is
then
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transported and poured into a metal grid to separate the size. The smaller ones will be dropped into
roller
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a roller
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while
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sand and water are prepared in order to mix them well. After mixing, there is a stage called
shaping
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the shaping
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stage which the output is shaped by two methods whether
wire
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by wire
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cutter or by mould.
Next,
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the rectangular
bricks
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is
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are
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delivered to drying over which they will be dried for 24 to 48 hours before being moved to
kiln
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a kiln
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which
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initially
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is initially
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heated at
moderate
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a moderate
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temperature (200 - 900
degree
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degrees
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celcius
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celsius
) and
secondly
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heated at
high
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a high
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temperature 1070 - 1300
degree
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degrees
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celcius
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Celcius
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). After
heated
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heating
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,
bricks
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will be cooled down in
cooling
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the cooling
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chamber
no
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for no
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more than 3 days. When they are ready to use, they will be utilized,
be
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apply
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packed, and
be
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apply
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delivered final destination.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks with synonyms.
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