What distinguishes young people from their parents' or grandparents' generation is a lack of physical exercise. Today's generation are spending far too long playing computer games, chatting aimlessly on social networking sites or simply watching TV, and too little time being active. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that today’s younger generation tends to spend more time on non-physical activities

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as playing computer games and just watching TV at home, resulting in being less active than their parents’ or grandparents’ generation. I strongly disagree with

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statement, because easier access to technological devices has given younger individuals more

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towards exercising, and because social media has been playing an important role in raising their awareness of their health.

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with, nowadays, you can see a large number of teenagers listening to music via their phones and music players

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jogging or walking in their city.

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is because doing exercise outside is considered something fun rather than torture for the youth, which can motivate them to become more active. Some statistics show that 75% of residents aged between 15 and 30 years old incorporate exercise into their everyday routines, explaining that listening to their favourite songs stimulates their

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to stay active.

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, technological development,

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as social media, significantly affected the younger generation in terms of

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.

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is because the progress in technology allows us to get stimulated more readily and effectively.

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a public opinion poll conducted by the Japanese government in 2020, a majority of the youth tended to get easily influenced by their

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influencers, resulting in starting

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out in the hope of achieving an ideal body shape or appearance like them. In conclusion, there is an argument saying that these days, few adolescents participate in athletic activities compared to people in the past

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technological development.

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, I totally disagree with the viewpoint because of the

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caused by favourite music through technological devices and because of more opportunities to get stimulated by their favourite figures on social media.