You recently returned from a trip to a place you found very interesting. Write a letter to your friend about your experience. In your letter: • Mention where you went and why you found it interesting. • Describe one or two memorable experiences from the trip. • Invite your friend to visit this place with you next time.

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Dear Jas, I hope all is well with you. I just came back from an amazing trip to [park name] park and I could not wait to tell you the breathtaking view of lights, landscapes, and peaceful atmosphere. The park is surrounded by long scenic walking trails; all
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makes a perfect getaway from the city. One of the most memorable experiences was ice skating on the frozen lake. The ice was so smooth for skating even though it was my first time, but people were very cooperative and I did it. One more thing I would like to tell you about is the food I ate. I had amazing local food at cheap prices. I tried almost everything, and all
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made my trip unforgettable. I know how much you love these kinds of winter activities, so I think you will love to visit
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place. Next time we should plan a trip together for some skating there and explore more. Let me know when you are free so we can plan. Looking forward to seeing you soon! Best, Raman

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Task Achievement
Try to include more specific details about the park's name and the season of your visit for a clearer context.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider organizing your experiences into more distinct paragraphs to enhance readability, like separating food experiences from activities.
Tone
Your letter has a friendly and engaging tone that is appropriate for your friend.
Content
You effectively described your memorable experiences, which adds personal touch and interest to the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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