The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart depicts the amount of
children
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trip
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trips
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from and to
school
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using different
modes
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of transport in a country. The provided data is in 1990 and 2010 of
children
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aged 5-12. At first glance,
it is clear that
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most
children
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were walking to and from
school
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in 1990
while
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in 2010 most were car passengers. The number of other
modes
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of transportation which are cycling,
bus
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, and walking and
bus
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decreased from 1990 to 2010. It is interesting to note that the only mode of transportation that increased sharply was
car
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a car
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, which started
by
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at
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just above 4
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millions
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million
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and ended
with
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at
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around 11
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millions
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million
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.
In contrast
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, the number of
children
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walking to and from
school
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dropped drastically from above 12
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millions
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million
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to 6
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millions
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million
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. A more detailed look at the chart reveals that the trend
of
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for
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other
modes
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of
transportations
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transportation
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which are cycling,
bus
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, and walking and
bus
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were downward. The
amount
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number
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of
children
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who cycled to and from
school
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started
with
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at
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more than 6
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millions
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million
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and ended
with
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at
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around 2
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millions
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million
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. As shown in the chart, the remaining
modes
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of transport which are
bus
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and walking and
bus
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were dropped by 2
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millions
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million
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and 3
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millions
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million
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respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, modes, children, bus, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trips
  • children
  • modes of transport
  • walk
  • cycle
  • public transport
  • drive
  • car
  • trends
  • decrease
  • increase
  • shift
  • convenient
  • comfortable
  • commuting
  • traffic congestion
  • safety concerns
  • significant
  • indicate
  • reasons
  • traffic congestion
  • safety concerns
  • 20-year period
  • doubled
  • considerable margin
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