The maps show improvement that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day

The maps show improvement that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day
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The two maps show how a
university
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campus changed from 2010 to now. Many new buildings were added, and some old buildings were removed.
Overall
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, the campus has become more modern, with new buildings for students and studies, but there is less green space than before. In 2010, there were two student accommodations, a
university
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office, a teaching block, a restaurant, some shops, and a lake with a lawn. The
university
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office was in the north, and the teaching block was next to it. The lake was in the center with green space around it. Now, the campus looks different. The
university
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office is gone, and a science building is there. The teaching block changed into an arts building. The restaurant and shops were replaced by a large student facility with shops and offices.
Also
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, more student accommodations were built. The lake is still there, but there is less green space.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words university with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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