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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the volumes of
waste
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 produced by three firms throughout the 15-year
period
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.
Overall
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,
a
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company
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 A released the highest proportion of garbage,
whereas
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a
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company
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 C,
this
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 figure is at the lowest level.
It is clear that
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company
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 A,
along with
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company
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 B decreased the volumes of
waste
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 over the
period
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,
while
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company
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 C increased them. Focusing first on the first two firms, in 2000, 3 and almost 8
tonnes
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 of garbage were released by the
company
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 A and B, with the following rise of these figures by 3
tonnes
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 by 2005. Notably, starting
from
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this
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 year, in the first organisation, we can see a gradual increase in
waste
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 by the end of the
period
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 to the level of approximately 11
tonnes
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 by 2015, as opposed to
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company
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 B which cut down the production of
waste
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 sharply, with only 3
tonnes
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 by 2015. As for the third organisation, in 2000, the amount of
waste
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 there was at the maximum level of 12
tonnes
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.
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, we can see a positive trend of decrease in
waste
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 there, with roughly 9
tonnes
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 by the end of the
period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, period, company, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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