The maps below show the diffences in Pebbleton city 20 years ago and now.

The maps below show the diffences in Pebbleton city 20 years ago and now.
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The two maps illustrate the Pebbleton village twenty years ago and now.
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, it can be clearly seen that the village has little changes with the addition of residential houses and recreational facilities over the period of 20 years. In the past, there were some houses on the northern
side
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,which were located near the lighthouse land. There was only one place to play on the southern
side
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, and above the west
side
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was
old
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an old
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fort. Nowadays, there is
community
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a community
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center
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centre
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added
in
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on
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the northwest
side
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,
while
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there are house areas that have been expanded over the period. The old fort was replaced by a children’s playground in the western corner. The education areas situated in the south remain unchanged,
while
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film
studio
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studios
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in the past
has
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have
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been converted into flats.
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, there is a
footpaths
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footpath
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was built that
connect
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connects
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the coast road to
old
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the old
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fort road, which
facilitate
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facilitates
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people’s access to the village of Pebbleton.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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