The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Consumer Spending on Travel (US $ Billion)

The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Consumer Spending on Travel (US $ Billion)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Consumer Spending on Travel (US $ Billion)
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The given chart illustrates how much money tourists spent in 10 different
countries
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in 2014. Units are measured in
billion
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USD.
Overall
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, the biggest expenditures of travelling consumers were in China. Following, the United States, Germany and the United Kingdom ranked the position of the highest spending places,
while
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in the other oriental
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countries
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countries,
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people spend less money.
To begin
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with China, in
this
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region
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region,
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traveller's expenditures achieved a record of approximately 115
billion
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USD. The second position in the list is equally occupied by the USA and Germany, where consumers spent around 90
billion
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.
Finally
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, the third place was given to Great Britain having about 47
billion
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tourists. The Asia
countries
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, except China, were considered low-cost places for travelling in 2014. Among them, Singapore was the most expensive,
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Taiwan had the least price. Consumers spent about 22 and only 5
billion
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USD respectively there. As regard the others oriental
countries
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, there were less than 20
billion
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spending by travelled people.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • spending
  • travel budgets
  • ranking
  • economy
  • consumer behavior
  • significant
  • notable
  • comparative analysis
  • patterns
  • habits
  • implications
  • spending habits
  • highest
  • highest-ranked
  • total expenditure
  • top-tier
  • lower-tier
  • economic status
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