The pie chart show the main reasons of money spent on various facilites in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart show the main reasons of money spent on various facilites in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart show the main reasons of money spent on various facilites in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart demonstrates the proportions of
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allocated to 10 distinct sectors in the UAE, in 2000.
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the UAE government mainly spent
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on social security and healthcare, the proportion of
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allocated to the development of transport was the lowest. To note, the majority of sectors received relatively even amounts of
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. In the UAE, the government predominantly developed social security, allocating 31.9% of the total budget to
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sector.
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followed by the 'health and personal social services' sector and education, comprising 16.9% and 12.1%, respectively. It is worth noting that debt interest and the 'other expenditure' category held identical proportions of 7.3% of the total expenditures,
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the
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allocated to defence made up 7%. Law and order, housing heritage and the environment held similar shares of 5.4% and 4.8%, respectively. In 2000, the government spent only 4.2% on industry, agriculture, and employment.
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, the amount of
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spent on transport was the smallest among the 10 illustrated categories, comprising a mere 2.9% of the total expenditures.

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