Nowadays, many people prefer to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reason for this? Do you think it is a positve or negative development?

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Nowadays,
well established
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brands
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in every industry including
automatives
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automotive
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and cosmetics etc have become
first
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preference of
majority
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the majority
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of
people
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. I believe
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has
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to positive development for mainly two reasons which are that
people
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can trust these famous
brands
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for their
quality
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and
reliablity
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reliability
and
secondly
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, to maintain their reputation companies are forced to keep up with
thier
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their
the
product
quality
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and the services they provide.
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, today the rising inflation has forced the public to be more cautious with their expenses. A person cannot afford to go for the
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and error method for purchasing any product whether it is a car or a food product as
they
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mojority
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majority
of
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people
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are running on a
specifc
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specific
budget. So, over the period of
time
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time,
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people
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have selected the
specifc
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specific
brands
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to stick with them for a long time depending on their
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products
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quality
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and the services they provide.
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, Toyota is known for
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reliable engine,
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its
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built
quality
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and after service they provide which made them the highest number of
car selling
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car-selling
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brand
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brands
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for
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last
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the last
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10 consecutive years.
Although
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there are many other
brands
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such
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as KIA and Ford which provide cars in
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segment and might provide better features
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due to
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the reputation of
Toyata
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Toyota
lovers,
people
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choose Toyota over other
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manufacturers
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.
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, we live in the world of social media where
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word of mouth can spread like
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wildfire across the world which can either take their
repution
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reputation
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the charts or
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even wipe them out of the market. So, to maintain
thier
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their
reputation in the market and to stay ahead of the competition,
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companies have to
provides
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it's
customer
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customers
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with the best of the best.
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, Canada Goose
is know
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for the best winter jackets and to stay on top of the food chain they have to
produces
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best
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the best
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quality
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jackets free of any defects every
years
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.
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, the company is charging a lot more than the competitors
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the value
they
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it
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provide
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is way more than the fees which makes
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it them
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them
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the
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undisputed king of the jacket industry. In conclusion, customers choosing the same famous
manufactures
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manufacturers
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over and over leads to
a positive outcomes
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by
bring
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out
best
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the best
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of the
companies
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company's
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ability to produce
high
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high-quality
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quality
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products
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for staying
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to stay
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ahead in the industry.
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, the increase in
high
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high-quality
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quality
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products
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build
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long term
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relationship
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relationships
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between producers and customers
due to
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it's
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its
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reliable
products
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.

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Task Achievement
Try to include more detailed reasons or explanations in your paragraphs to fully develop your ideas. You have a good start but some points could be elaborated further for clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that your paragraphs flow smoothly. Using transition words can help connect your ideas and improve the overall coherence of the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Pay attention to minor grammar and spelling errors, as they can affect the clarity of your writing. For example, consider editing 'reliablity' to 'reliability' and 'provides it's customer' to 'provide their customers'.
Task Achievement
Your essay presents a clear opinion on the topic, which is essential for a strong response.
Task Achievement
You have used relevant examples, such as Toyota and Canada Goose, to support your points, which adds credibility to your argument.

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Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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