One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Today is Saturday. In the morning my back is hurt. I wondered so I woke up at 10 am but

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felt tired. I heard Azaa laugh and

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couldn'tt

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couldn't

sleep again. Didn'

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wake up

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just waited for Azaa and her father to get out for home so

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got up brushed my tooth and drank water one cup

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coconut oil

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my mouth. I couldn'

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buy eggs so

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haven'

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egged but

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have eaten

oat

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with water . Every morning

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eat eggs it is my routine or habit. If

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don'tt

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eat eggs,

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feel hungry

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, every morning

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can'

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wait to drink a

coffee

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everytime

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I'm happy

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drink a

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because

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love

coffee

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smell and taste, but

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is strong. Recently days

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drank a

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with MCT oil I feel fresh and strong,

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brain is full of energy but

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feel today. My brain is foggy and tired

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work. In the afternoon

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went to

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library so

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found setting tables, busy in the library today. I did a read the test on my eyes

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coherence and cohesion

Focus on structuring your essay clearly with a distinct introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph should have a clear main idea.

task achievement

Try to develop your points more fully and ensure you answer the question directly. Make sure your opinion is clearly stated and supported with examples.

language

Work on sentence structure and grammar to improve clarity. For example, use 'brush my teeth' instead of 'brushed my tooth' and 'didn't wake up' instead of 'didn't wake up, I just waited.'

coherence and cohesion

Use linking words and phrases to improve the flow of your writing, such as 'firstly,' 'moreover,' and 'on the other hand.' This will help your reader follow your ideas more easily.

content

You express your personal experiences and feelings, which adds a unique touch to your writing.

content

Your attempt to describe daily habits shows a good understanding of routine, which is relatable for readers.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

194 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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