The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The two charts provide information about the percentages of types of industries that use electricity. The data was taken in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, manufacturing had the highest count from all of the sectors in 1995 and 2005, was one-third.
However
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, manufacturing tended downward by around 2% from 1995 to 2005. Almost all of the sectors experienced a decrease from 1995 to 2005, except the service and household. The use of electricity in both of the companies increased from around 5% to 7%.
In addition
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, households had over a quarter percentage in 2005 and continued to decrease about 5% in 1995,
while
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service increased by nearly 10% in ten years.
On the other hand
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, the lowest number was service in 1995,
while
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fishery had the smallest amount in 2005.
Moreover
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, the decline of fishery in using energy was the biggest decrease from 1995 to 2005. It was over 5%
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but under 10% in ten years.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • industries
  • electricity usage
  • 1995
  • 2005
  • comparison
  • increase
  • decrease
  • service sector
  • manufacturing sector
  • residential sector
  • agricultural sector
  • main features
  • summarize
  • reporting
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