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The chart below shows the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below shows the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
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The chart provides key information about the amount of magazines sold per
person
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 across five countries in a two-year period , with the planned sales for the year 2007 .
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the sales of magazines have been
decrease
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decreasing
decreased
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 over the years .
In addition
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, The popularity of magazines was very high in
country
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 B in 2003 .
Whereas
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, In
country
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 D it was less popular .
According to
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 what is shown , countries A,B and C
they
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apply
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faced a significant drop in the year 2007 . For
country
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 A it went from over 40 to under 40 sold per
person
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 .
Country
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 B was at 50 per
person
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 and it fell to less than 50 sold .
Finally
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,
country
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 C faced a downward trend . In terms of, The
country
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 D and E they had an upward trend in 2007 ,
country
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 D was under 20 sold per
person
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 and it went to over 20 per cent . And for
country
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 E it increased in 2005 and after
that
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that,
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 it went down again to about 5 sold per cent .

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words person, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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