Some pepple claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Many individuals claim that enough waste material is not recycled by people at their

home

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. It is an argued issue whether authorities should implement stern actions to

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encourage

people to recycle their products at their houses or not. I believe that there are several other ways to motivate them in order to reuse their

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that are educate people through introducing a program

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related to the benefits of recycling and offering incentives to them by the government to recycle their items. Commencing with the most salient

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how individuals can motivate is

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implementing recycled program about

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the advantages

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of recycling in every country can push individuals to save their

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. They can not only come to know about the

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of throwing their waste material away

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also

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get to know the effect of the

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material on the atmosphere.

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, the government should offer a small amount of funds to citizens can encourage them to recycle their products.

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, many countries

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as Germany, and Austria are known for encouraging their native to recycle their household items,

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as beverage cans, plastic bottles and many more through offering incentives.

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, I contemplate that launching a program about recycling

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offering some incentives to

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can help to recycle household items.

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Ensure that each paragraph revolves around a clear main idea that is supported with relevant details.

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Proofread your essay to correct spelling mistakes (like 'encuroage') and grammatical errors that can detract from clarity.

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You provided relevant examples from other countries that support your points about recycling incentives.

coherence and cohesion

Your essay structure generally follows a clear introduction, main body, and conclusion format, which is good.

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

216 words

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