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Some people say children no longer need to develop handwriting skills others believe that and writing is still important discuss about this views and give your opinion.

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in today's digital
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 some people argue that
children
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handwriting skills since most communication is now done through typing.
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, others believe that handwriting
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 essential skill .
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 both views and
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 my opinion. On the one hand,
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increasing use of technology has reduced the need for handwriting. many students and professionals
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computers tablets
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 and smartphones for writing and communication . Digital documents are easier to edit ,share and store compared to handwriting notes.
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 , with the rise of artificial intelligence and
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 software , some believe that traditional handwriting is becoming
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obsolete
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 the other hand, handwriting is still considered an important skill for several reasons .
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 studies have shown that writing by hand improves memory and learning .
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 handwriting enhances
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coordination and
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children
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 develop better control over their movements . A balanced approach should be adopted, where
children
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 are taught both handwriting and typing skills . In conclusion ,
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 technology has to
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the necessity of handwriting in some areas.
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 ,
children
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 should continue to develop handwriting skills alongside digital literacy

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task achievement
The essay addresses both views and provides a clear personal opinion, showing a good understanding of the topic.
coherence and cohesion
The structure is generally organized, with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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