The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the percentage of
households
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owning each type of electrical
appliances
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appliance
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and the
number
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of weekly
hours
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of
households
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doing housework in one country from 1920 to 2019.
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,
while
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the
number
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of refrigerators and vacuum cleaners rapidly grew over the period, that of
waching
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watching
washing
machines experienced a moderate increase with a small
fructuation
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fluctuation
fluctuations
. The amount of time spent on housework showed a significant decline. In
term
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terms
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of electrical appliances,
although
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nearly 0% of
households
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had refrigerators in 1920, the figure significantly surged to 90% and 100% in 1960 and 1980 respectively, surpassing other devices. Vacuum cleaners
initially
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started at 30% in 1920,
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but its
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its
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their
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number
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also
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increased to 100% in 2000, making all
households
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having
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have
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both vacuum cleaners and refrigerators after that year. Washing machines,
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, began at 40% which was the highest percentage, the
number
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moderately rose and fluctuated, ending at over 70% which much lower than others. For the amount of time spent doing housework, the
number
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initially
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stood at 50
hours
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per week in 1920, it sharply dropped to 20
hours
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per week in 1960. The
number
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continued decreasing to under 20
hours
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in 1980,
remaning
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remaining
steady
untill
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until
2000 before slightly falling to around 10
hours
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per week
at the end
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially".
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, number, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership of electrical appliances
  • steadily increased
  • dramatically decreased
  • correlating the rise
  • became common
  • households
  • prevalence
  • technological advancements
  • increased affordability
  • household chores
  • labor-saving devices
  • allocated for housework
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