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Your colleague is traveling from another country by plane for a meeting. You have arranged the airport pickup, hotel accommodation and planned his/her meetings. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should: •say when and where you will meet him/her •explain where he/she will stay •tell him/her about the other arrangements you made.

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Dear Sara, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you about some details of your trip to Istanbul for the annual ceremony of the company. Since your flight lands at 10:30, I will be at the Istanbul International Airport at 11 o’clock and wait for you
in
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 the arrival gate so that you find me easily. As we discussed in our Zoom meeting, all the staff who come from overseas will stay in
Hilton
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the Hilton
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 Hotel, where the ceremony will be held.
This
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 hotel is well-known for its full facilities and quality services that I hope you will enjoy.
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 to participating in meetings and the ceremony, we can visit some historical landmarks,
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 as
Ayasofia
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the Ayasofia
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 Mosque and Galata Tower.
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, I have booked a table in Ruby, one of the best restaurants in Istanbul with a breathtaking view, in order to introduce Turkey’s rich culture and our tasty cuisines. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Best regards Sinem

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coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus and contains sentences that support the main idea for better coherence.
task achievement
Consider adding a brief overview of the meeting agenda to enhance the thoroughness of your response.
task achievement
Your letter has a warm and professional tone, which is very suitable for this context.
coherence and cohesion
The structure of your letter is clear and easy to follow, with a logical progression of ideas.
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