The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019

The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019
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This
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table illustrates the mean
age
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of mothers with their first newborn from 1920 to 2019 in two countries UK and Kazakhstan with 20
years
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steps in the data. The questioned
age
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in the United Kingdom Fluctuates around the
age
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of 27.5
years
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old with a slow rise to 28.9,
while
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the Asian country's women's
age
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for their first labour has jumped to 27.6 by 4.1
years
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. Focusing on the European state, the trend between the
years
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1920 to 1940 and 1980 to 2000 was ascending, adding 1.3
years
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to the 26.5
years
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of the 1920 data, and
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with 2
years
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increase from 26.9 in 1980 to 28.9 in 2019.
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, the country has been faced with a minor decrease in the average
age
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making the laboured women younger by 0.6
years
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in the year 1980 from 1960.
To sum up
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.
Although
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the UK had a slow growth in the average
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of birth-giving women and
also
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, had ups and downs in
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age
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, Kazakstan had a rapid rise in
this
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age
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slow" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fertility rate
  • average age of childbirth
  • demographic changes
  • trend analysis
  • birth rate
  • cultural factors
  • economic influences
  • social dynamics
  • societal implications
  • population growth
  • comparative analysis
  • historical data
  • child rearing
  • family planning
  • maternal age
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