Some people believe that during teenage
are the happiest time of their lives.
, some of them think that
are happier time, despite
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more responsibilities.
,
essay will describe these two views based on my opinion.
First of all,
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are the time
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do not think about their lives. They usually just study and play with friends without responsible concerns,
, getting
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, or finding jobs.
, during these
, there are some negative sides as well
as, have not enough freedom
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with
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or
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, cannot make money by themselves, or
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young to do
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like
, or smoking. Which these interactions can do in
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times.
These
are the period that you have the most
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including
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money by
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. Even though
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they can do whatever they want,
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they have greater duties to
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, search appropriate jobs,
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care
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parents, or
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yourselvesCorrect pronoun usage
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healthy
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surrounding of intoxication areas.
, not everyone
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efficient times during
.
, each step of
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yearsFix the agreement mistake
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have both advantages and disadvantages
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we cannot receive the happiest times
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of
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lifeFix the agreement mistake
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.
, we are unable to choose the most
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durations, in spite
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memories in each period
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better to make
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.