The line graph
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
percantages
of the residents aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in the Correct your spelling
percentages
percentage
USA
, Use synonyms
Sweden
and Use synonyms
Japan
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it is clearly seen that Linking Words
Use synonyms
Japan
population increased significantly after 2020. Change noun form
Japan's
However
, the Linking Words
USA
Use synonyms
was remained
stable between 2000 and 2020.
İn 1940 , Change to the active voice
remained
Use synonyms
Japan
seniors Change noun form
Japan's
were
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
than
other countries, Change preposition
by than
with
5%. Change preposition
by
Whereas
,the Linking Words
USA
and Use synonyms
Sweden
were approximately 10% and 7% respectively. Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Japan
old population Change noun form
Japan's
were
decreased slightly from 1940 to 1960 but other nations gradually Unnecessary verb
apply
rise
to 15%. Wrong verb form
rose
Furthermore
,Linking Words
Change preposition
in
two decade
Add a hyphen
two-decade
year
period starting in 1960 , Correct your spelling
two-year
Japans
age society Change noun form
Japan's
were remained
stable.
İn 2000 , Change to the active voice
remained
have remained
Japan
and Use synonyms
Sweden
were slightly Use synonyms
increase
, with 5% and 15% respectively. Wrong verb form
increased
While
Linking Words
,
the Remove the comma
apply
Use synonyms
Usa
remained stable at about 15% between 2000 and 2020. Correct your spelling
US
Use synonyms
Japan
senior inhabitants sharply increased Change noun form
Japan's
after
2020 to 2040, Change preposition
from
with
approximately 27%. At that time Change preposition
by
Sweden
and the Use synonyms
USA
Use synonyms
were
increased gradually to 25% and about 23% respectively.Unnecessary verb
apply
naz.erdogan2006