The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June

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The given line graph indicates

that

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how many proposals were accepted at a tourist office in The United Kingdom during six months ,from January to June. Looking at the

overall

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structure,it is readily

aparent

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apparent

that,

requests

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in person and by telephone increased in the given time period,the opposite was true for by letter/email.

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Also

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Also,

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requests

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in person

was

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the highest score in the ultimate .

Initially

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requests

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in person in January were

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the lowest level ,but they rose significantly and reached

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the peak.It

was

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did

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not

witnessed

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any decline in the number of personal

inquires

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In contrast

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requests

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by letter or email were in the medium point but as time

goes

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by they showed the lowest indication.Looking attentively ,it is clearly shown that they decreased

steady

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steadily

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in the given time frame.The most preference was in the telephone

requests

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in January which approximately amounted to 900 and underwent 800 in the 2nd month and rose gradually

while

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stayed

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the same in March and April,

accordingly

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1000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words requests with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

161 words

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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June

Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere; this has bad effects on our lifestyles and diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

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