The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

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Both maps provide information about the transformation of Ryemouth's village between 1995 and the present.

Overall

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, there are many developments in that place

according to

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the comparison of the details.

Firstly

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, there is no fishing port again now at the sea in the south,

while

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there was a fishing port at the marine in 1995.

Secondly

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, the shops in the Southwest changed to restaurants now, and the fish market which is located opposite the shop has changed to several apartments.

Thirdly

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, nowadays, there is a car park beside the hotel in the Northeast.

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, the farmland and forest park in 1995 has improved become a golf and tennis park. The location is still the same, in the Northeast.

In addition

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, there are some improvements in housing from Northwest.

For example

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, in 1995, there were twelve houses, but now, they have sixteen homes.

On the other hand

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, there are only a few changes on the street from south to north. The development from the road is only for access to the Residence.

Moreover

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, a cafe near the sea is still similar from 1995 until now.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

184 words

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

In the future people will not need to have schools, galleries, museums or libraries because everything from education to culture and entertainment will be available online. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

You are planning to take a vacation. Write the letter to friend. In your letter Describe the vocation spot you have chosen Explain how you plan to spend your time there Invite your friend to join you on your vacation

Globalization is creating a world with a single culture and destroying national identity in the process. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?