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Dear Abhinav, How're you? Hope

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letter finds you well. You would be delighted to know about the Expo 2022 event going to happen next month on 22nd July 2022, in Abu Dhabi. I've got the extra two passes for the exhibition as I'm a volunteer at the event. I know how much you're passionate about the latest tech, so thought of inviting you. I'm sure, you would be amused to see the pavilions. It is organised by the government of UAE and most countries around the world will be taking part in it to showcase their latest technological advancements. It is going to be a month-long event with the closing day on the 22nd of August. I suggest planning at least a week's visit.

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, since it's the tourist season here, I'm planning to take you to other destinations where you can experience adventures like desert safari and sky diving. We can

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plan to see Burj Khalifa and the Museum of Future in Dubai. Of course, it will be your first time in the country, you must stay at my place. I really hope you'll be able to come over and write back soon, Take care, Rubina

msrubinagillFri Apr 04 2025

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Task Achievement

Ensure that the introduction includes a brief mention of the purpose of the letter to enhance clarity.

Coherence and Cohesion

Consider using more varied linking words to improve the flow between ideas.

Task Achievement

The letter effectively maintains a friendly and inviting tone throughout, which is suitable for a personal letter.

Coherence and Cohesion

Each paragraph presents a clear idea, contributing to the overall coherence of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

199 words

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bilingual
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cultural awareness
opportunities
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linguistic abilities
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language barrier
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Describe a person you love/like/admire You should say: What relation this person is to you? What are your first memories of this person? How often do you see this person? And explain why you really admire this person.

All cars, trucks and buses will be driverless vehicles in the future, and people will only be passengers.

Modern form of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their frieds. this has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some cities have few controls over design and construction on housing and office building. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?