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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries
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The line chart illustrates the
percentage
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 of citizens aged 65 and older from 1940 to 2040 across three regions.
Overall
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,
while
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 the population in each country increases throughout the specified period,
Japan
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 is expected to experience the most significant increase.
However
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, the United
States
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, which had the largest
percentage
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 at the beginning of the timeline, is predicted to have the lowest
percentage
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 by the end. In 1940, the proportion of elderly people in the United
States
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 was below 10%, compared to around 7.5% in Sweden and 5% in
Japan
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.
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 the rates for elderly individuals in the United
States
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 and Sweden gradually rose by just under 15%,
Japan
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's rate declined steadily to approximately 4%. Looking to the future,
Japan
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 is anticipated to witness a substantial rise of more than 15% from 2030 to 2040, resulting in the highest
percentage
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. Meanwhile, the figures for the United
States
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 and Sweden are expected to grow by less than 25% and around 25%, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, japan, states with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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