The table and graph below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and graph below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table and graph below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph and table illustrate the statics of
cinema
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visits in Auckland from 1995 to 2003.
It is clear that
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the
number
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of people between the ages of 14 to 24 was the highest during the past 8
years
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,
while
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people who are older than 50
years
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old seldom visit the
cinema
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.
Furthermore
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, the largest average
number
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is in 1997. In 1997 and 1999, the percentage of the population that went to the
cinema
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was the same at 72%, but in average data, there was a higher
number
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of
cinema
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visits in 1997 (11.2) than in 1999 (7.3) which was the lowest.
Although
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80 per cent of the population went to the
cinema
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in 2001, its average
number
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was only the third largest with 8.4. In 1995, only 67 per cent of people visited the
cinema
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. In the line graph, the tendency of each different age group was similar, reaching its peak in 1997 followed by decreasing to the bottom in 1999
then
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being stable. The
number
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of 50
years
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old group was still below 10 counts in these 8
years
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.

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