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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the quantity of production
waste
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 in three companies between 2000 and 2015 years.
Overall
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, it
evident
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is evident
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 that the amounts of
waste
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 produced
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a decrease
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decrease
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decreased
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 in
two
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the two
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 companies ,
in contrast
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, one
company
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of
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apply
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them
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apply
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has
highest
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the highest
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 of
waste
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 produced.
To begin
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 with
detailed
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a detailed
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 analysis,
at
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in
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 the beginning,
company
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 one
has
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had
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highest
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the highest
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 amount of
waste
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 produced
over
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by
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 all companies which accounted for 12
tonnes
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 in 2000.
However
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,
this
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 quantity went down by
further
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 nearly 4
tonnes
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in
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at
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 the end of
period
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the period
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 shown. On
other
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the other
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 hand ,
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company
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in company
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 B, there was a significant
increased
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increase
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 in
waste
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 production,from just under 9
tonnes
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 in 2000 to 10
tonnes
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 in 2005 , before falling sharply to 3
tonnes
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 in 2015 .
In addition
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, the amount of
waste
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 produced in
company
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 C
increase
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increased
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 dramatically in the
frist
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first
 five years,and
then
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 there was a gradual
rose
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rise
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 to reaching a peak of approximately 10
tonnes
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 in 2015.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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