Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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world, at some point, everyone dreamed of becoming a celebrity but everything comes with a price. Many people debate that photographers must have some limits,

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my perspective about it. On the one hand, everyone has the right to keep his/her life private and for a celebrity, it is getting difficult these days because of some paparazzi. They are not only clicking them on some events or functions but

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invading their private life by following them with cameras to their homes, gym etc.

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should be stopped as they are famous and rich it is crucial for them to keep themselves away from camera clicks from a security point of view as well.

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, if influencers were not in any news or in any magazine

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people would forget them and they

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lose their status as stars. So, to maintain their status among the public it is very important that they were in the news.

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is beneficial in both ways as it

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more jobs for people and by keeping them on television they were helping

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of followers and fans.

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my opinion the media plays a vital role in making someone famous and keep in the limelight. So, media persons can click

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or interview them but with some dignity and manners.

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Ensure that the introduction clearly states your opinion on the topic.

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Incorporate more specific examples to support your viewpoints, especially regarding the impact of paparazzi on celebrities' lives and careers.

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Work on constructing smoother transitions between paragraphs and improving the logical flow of ideas.

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Make sure to proofread your conclusion, as there are minor grammatical errors.

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You have addressed both sides of the argument effectively.

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Your understanding of the issue reflects a thoughtful approach to the topic.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

invasion of privacy
personal space
media scrutiny
mental health
public figures
relentless pursuit
legal implications
ethical considerations
tabloid journalism
financial gain
public interest

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