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The chart shows the amount of snowfall at three Canadian sl<i resorts over a two month period.

The chart shows the amount of snowfall at three Canadian sl<i resorts over a two month period.
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The bar chart provides key information about the
amount
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 of
snowfall
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 across the different types of resorts: Viking Mountain, Snowbury, and
Powder
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Peak
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, over the period shown.
Overall
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,
Powder
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Peak
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 had the highest
amount
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 of
snowfall
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 in both months.
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, most of the resorts experienced more
snowfall
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 in December except for
Powder
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Peak
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, which had higher
snowfall
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 in November.
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, snowbury and Viking Mountain both saw less
snowfall
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 compared to
Powder
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Peak
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. In November,
Powder
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 Resort showed a noticeable increase in
snowfall
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amount
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, with around 39
centimetres
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,
while
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 in December it was almost half to about 20
centimetres
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. Snowberry and Viking Mountain both had the least
amount
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 of
snowfall
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 at the beginning of the period, reaching 18 and 9
centimetres
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 respectively. Meanwhile,
snowfall
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 in snowbury increased rapidly in December, rising to just above 30
centimetres
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, showing a huge difference between the two months,
whereas
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 a slight increase occurred in Viking resorts, rising to around 12
centimetres
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, snowfall, powder, peak, centimetres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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