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The chart below shows the price in Euros of four types of bread per kilogram in one European country from 2001 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the price in Euros of four types of bread per kilogram in one European country from 2001 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph displays the
price
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 in
Euros
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 of four kinds of different
bread
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 per kilogram in a single European country from 2001 to 2005.
Overall
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, the Wholegrain cost accounted for substantial growth and hit its peak of 1.8
Euros
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 in 2002.
However
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, it faced a significant drop after 2002 and ended at the
price
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 of 0.8 Euro in 2005.
On the other hand
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, Brown
bread
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also
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 incurred a dramatic increase in 2002, hitting its top
price
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 at 1.6
Euros
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 in the
last
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 year, making it the highest
price
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 among four pieces of
bread
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 in 2005. White and Rye
bread
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 started at the same
price
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 at 0.6 Euro in 2001,
nevertheless
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, along the way, White
bread
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 has steady in numbers and finished at about 1.3
Euros
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 in 2005,
while
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 Rye
bread
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 had a steady
price
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 of approximately 0.6
Euros
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 from the beginning of the year 2001 until 2005.

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