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Living in a country when you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious serius social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Foreigners often face difficulties when trying to have a conversation with local people. In
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 because being a non-native speaker it is very difficult to survive in an overseas country.
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 with, immigrants often complain about language barriers,
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 phenomenon increases challenges in making new friends and
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 building a social life in an unfamiliar region.
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 condition is frequently observed in international students who fly abroad for
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 studies, as they feel shy and less confident in front of others, they tend to avoid situations that require long conversations with their local peers.
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, it has been shown that foreigners are less likely to make eye contact with locals and are unable to share problems with native people
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, the individual becomes more depressed and anxious about their decision to settle abroad.
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,
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 dilemma not only creates difficulty in building a social circle but
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 affects the person's daily.
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 means that an individual may be unable to ask for an address or directions to unknown places, and students struggle in their college lectures.
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 situation stimulates frustration.
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, a friend of mine struggles to explain his college project to the professor.
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, misunderstanding, he got fewer marks in his academic practical exams. In conclusion, I am convinced that the language barrier can cause social and practical dilemmas for people living in foreign countries.
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 situation can be tackled by involving in terminology classes and with the help of vocabulary translating mobile applications.

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Consider providing a more nuanced view by acknowledging any potential counterarguments to demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.
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Improve the range of vocabulary to express ideas more clearly and effectively.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and that this idea is fully developed and supported with relevant details.
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The introduction clearly states your position on the issue, which sets a strong foundation for your argument.
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The use of specific examples, like your friend's experience, helps to illustrate your points effectively.

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