The table above shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the information and making comparisons where relevant.

The table above shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the information and making comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates percentage information about different
features
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that people used on their mobile
phones
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in 2006, 2008, and 2010.
Overall
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, between 2006 and 2010 the main reason people used their mobile
phones
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was to make phone calls.
However
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, there was a significant increase in the popularity of other
features
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on mobile
phones
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, especially Internet searching. In 2006, 100% of mobile phone users used their
phones
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to make calls, followed by sending and receiving text messages at 73% and taking photos at 66%.
In contrast
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, playing games and playing music were less popular at 17% and 12% respectively. Notably, there were no figures for users conducting Internet searches or recording videos. In the next 4 years, the three
features
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of making calls, sending and receiving text messages and taking photos did not change much. The other two
features
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saw insignificant increases.
Above all
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, the proportion of people using their
phones
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to access the Internet jumped to 41% in 2008 and
then
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to 73% in 2010.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words features, phones with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • mobile phone owners
  • features
  • trend
  • comparison
  • usage
  • demographic factors
  • technological advancements
  • increase/decrease
  • over time
  • observable trends
  • usage percentages
  • notable differences
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