You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir, I hope you're doing well and in good spirits. I am a respectful citizen of Surat City. I am writing

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letter to correct the information you gave in your recent travel magazine of my small town, which is the veer named south gujarat university's location and the facility they held, the university is located in the central part of the town rather than the southern part,

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, it is not only famous for its educational facility but

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famous for the sports activities they held on campus every year in summer.

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travel advisory for the visitor of the town. Because, the campus holds the largest auditorium of the Gujarat state itself, with 25000 seating arrangements for viewers, by adding

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information travellers from all around the world are keen to be a part of

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a facility.

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, the location is very important for them to be on

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time there without wasting their time in travelling. In my suggestion, to get rid of the mistake, the magazine director has to send an extra copy of the updated advisory to whoever orders the old version of it, meanwhile, they

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have to recall all the copies of the version with the mistake. Thanks and Regards, David