The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summaris the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Ulvi)

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The two maps illustrate how the town of Denham has changed from 1986 to the present day.

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, what stands out from the maps is that green areas have been cut down and residential places have been constructed. Moving to a more detailed analysis, the farmlands have been demolished to make way for

houses

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. The areas of the gardens in the middle of the town have been reduced and the large

houses

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located in

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area have been replaced with retirement homes. With regard to residential buildings, the number of

houses

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has increased along the road which goes to the bridge and new paths have been constructed which are connected with the previous road.

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, new

houses

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have been built

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the paths. Another interesting change in Denham is that the shops next to the post office have been eliminated and the the building of the primary school has been expanded.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

152 words

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The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summaris the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Ulvi)

Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways thn publis transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagee?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write a letter for a membership or participation in an event

You recently took a two day course. Write feedback to the course organiser. In your letter Detail the course Explain what you liked Tell them what they should do better

In many countries, people increasingly talk about money such as how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations. Why? Is this a positive or negative trend?