The bar graph shows the production of fruits by weight in 1995, 2005, and 2015.

The bar graph shows the production of fruits by weight in 1995, 2005, and 2015.
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The given bar graph compares the cultivation volume of four types of fruits in a particular Australian state from 1995 to 2015, with a ten-year interval.
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while
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the farming measure of pears decreased significantly, the reverse was true for others, with the production volume of apples seeing the biggest increase. In 1995, the growth of pears was dominant with just over 130 thousand tons in
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category.
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, it could not remain constant and started to fall sharply to 80 million kg
at the end
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of the period.
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, apples had been cultivated in 80,000 tons in one state in 1995. In the next 20 years, the quantity of apples experienced a substantial rise to just under 120,000 tons. The farming yield of citrus fruit oranges increased slightly from approximately 70 million kg to about 90 million kilograms over the period. Regarding peaches, they were the least grown among all other fruits in a single Australian state. The production of peaches was able to almost double by a sharp climb between 1995 and 2015.

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