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Band 4.5

Write a letter to your friend from a different country. Invite him to a party at your home and include the following What teh party is about give directions on how to get to your place suggest how to accomodate her

Dear Seerat, Hope
your
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you
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 are doing
good
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well
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! It's been so long since we met. I have been thinking about making plans for our
meet up
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meet-up
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. So, I am inviting you to visit me on my 25th birthday in July. I am organizing a small party at my
house
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. It will start in the evening around 5 PM. We have
cake cutting
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a cake-cutting
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 ceremony and
dance
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a dance
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 party afterwards.
Also
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, I have booked a table at
Italian
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an Italian
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restaurent
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restaurant
 for dinner. I know
this
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 going to be your first time visiting my
house
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, don't be scared I am going to give you the proper details to make your way
easy
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apply
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towards my place. So, after landing at the airport, make your way to the
bus
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 terminal. You are going to take
the
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apply
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bus
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 number 7 from
the
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apply
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bus
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 terminal A which is going to be right in front of
the
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apply
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Starbucks.
This
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Bus
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 will drop you at Gage
park
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Park
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 from where there is a
five minute
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five-minute
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 walk to my home. From the park stop, you have to start walking towards the
chruch
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church
, whose tomb is visible from there. After reaching there, turn your right and you will see
green
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a green
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color
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colour
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house
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 beside
that is
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 my
house
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:
House
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 No 52. If you think the directions are
overwhleming
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overwhelming
, let me know
I
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and I
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will arrange a taxi for you from the airport. Since I am planning to have a small party so you don't have to worry about the
accomodation
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accommodation
. I will keep a room for you in my
house
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. Please let me know if
this
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 plan works for you
otherwise
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 I can change things
according to
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 your preference. Eagerly waiting for your reply. Yours Lovingly, Jot

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coherence and cohesion
Work on the clarity of the directions to ensure they are fully understandable without being overwhelming.
task achievement
Make sure to proofread for small spelling and grammatical errors to enhance the professionalism of the letter.
task achievement
You included all necessary points such as the party details, directions, and accommodation options.
task achievement
The letter maintains a warm and friendly tone, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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