nowadays many people use social networks do you think advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, there has been a significant growth in the number of people using social networks.
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trend has numerous drawbacks including addiction and health issues, I strongly believe that the benefits ranging from communication, and entertainment to promoting the business far exceed the drawbacks.
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essay will discuss both the pros and cons of
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task achievement
Expand on the examples and provide specific instances to illustrate the points made. For example, mention specific social networks or studies showing the benefits and drawbacks.
coherence and cohesion
While the introduction and conclusion are strong, ensure that the main body paragraphs are well-structured with clear topic sentences and transitions to enhance flow.
task achievement
Strong introduction that clearly outlines the topic and your stance.
coherence and cohesion
Well-defined conclusion that summarizes your viewpoint effectively.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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