A museum near your home is looking for people to do a part-time voluntary unpaid job. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum Director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work. in your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

Hello Sir/Madam, Hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter regarding my interest in joining you as a part-time volunteer.My name is Maahi Sharma. I live across the street from the museum.I got to know that you need some people for voluntary work. Actually, I was working in a printing company as a logistics coordinator.And, my employer laid off me

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a shortage of work and they will call me back in the next couple of months.

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, I thought that I should join you until I resume my work with my previous company. I am good at communication and bookkeeping. I can help you with taking care of the visitors and keeping records of all the events throughout the day. As of now, I will be available for all the days from next week (11 May) except weekends.You can reach me at my e-mail address [email protected] for

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details. I look forward to hearing from you soon! Yours faithfully, Maahi

its.maahi987Fri May 02 2025

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coherence and cohesion

The introduction could be improved by clearly stating your intention earlier to make the letter's purpose more explicit.

coherence and cohesion

Try to separate the explanation of your skills into individual points for clarity, improving readability.

task achievement

Your letter has a friendly and polite tone, suitable for a voluntary job application.

task achievement

You included your availability clearly, which is important for the role you are applying for.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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Voluntary unpaid work
Museum Director
Intention
Contribute
Community
Art
History
Skills
Qualities
Communication
Organization
Attention to detail
Passion
Learning
Teamwork
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