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the bar chart shows the percantage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050

the bar chart shows the percantage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050
The bar graph illustrates the share of the world
population
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 held by the populations of four countries —
India
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, China, the
USA
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, and Japan — in the years 1950, 2003, and a projection for 2050.
Overall
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,
while
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India
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 and China accounted for the highest proportions and are expected to continue
this
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 trend, the
USA
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 and Japan consistently showed lower figures throughout the period. Notably, the shares of all countries’
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population
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populations
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 are expected to experience either a decline or a period of stability, except for
India
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, whose proportion is projected to rise. Despite following contrasting trends,
India
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 and China had the largest
population
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 shares
overall
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 . Starting at 15% in 1950,
India
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’s
population
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 share to nearly 17% in 2002. It is projected to increase
further
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, reaching around 20% by 2050. Meanwhile, China’s share declined sharply from a peak of about 24% in 1950 to 20% in 2002 and is expected to drop considerably by 2050, at 15%. The
USA
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 and Japan,
on the other hand
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, had relatively smaller numbers. The
USA
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 made up approximately 8% of the global
population
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 in 1950, before decreasing to 5% by 2002 — a figure expected to remain unchanged by 2050.
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, Japan’s proportion is predicted to decline significantly from 4% in 1950 to just 2% by 2050.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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