Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Parents have raised their concerns about schooling methods which are used to teach their pupils in

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. It is often believed that stiff competition among

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in class has a detrimental impact on their child,

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others claim that challenging surroundings encourage

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to increase their productivity and facilitate them to develop creative thinking skills.

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before moving on to look at those against it. In spite of the argument in favour, I believe that, despite some prospects of intense competition, generally it takes a toll on the mental health of a child in

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. The prime advantage of a competitive climate in educational settings is that it helps

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to be focused

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studying and instils a sense of self-improvement.

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kind of learning creates intellectually competent individuals for the corporate world.

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, the United Kingdom's boarding

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are designed to graduate

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who are potential soldiers. I believe these

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represent only a a fraction of

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who play their part in the shaping image of the country. Intense competition during the primitive years can cause serious psychological problems in

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their personality development.

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pressure of expectations by their

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these kinds of

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are prone to failure, which leads to problems in their personal lives.

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, about 50% of bright

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end up failing in professional careers because they cannot cope with the pressure imposed on them. In conclusion, despite a few success stories of

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studying in tough environments in

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, the overwhelming majority of

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are not accustomed to

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kind of learning and,

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reason, I believe that

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should not be forced to function in stiff environments because it damages their learning process and halts their progress.