Education should be free for everyone do you agree or disagree with this statement and to what extent?

In today's era of rising living costs a significant number of individuals are concerned about their expenses of learning. It is advised that schooling should be free of cost. I agree with the statement to some extent. There are two main reasons why schooling should be free for each and every person.
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, some talented students who belong to unprivileged communities, are deprived of higher study. If these students are helped financially to get educated
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it is not only beneficial for their personal, but
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good for the country's growth. These highly educated and talented students contribute to the GDP of the country. When they do highly paid jobs, and pay taxes to the authority
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it leads
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growth of the country .
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, it reduces the crime rate. When a whole
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is eligible to do academics without paying tuition fees, everyone would be swamped to make their future. After getting an education
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people have plenty of options to set up their career which helps for a good mindset. study will facilitate mind stability,
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which negative thoughts ,
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as theft, drugs, murders etcetera, will never come into their minds. That being said, I believe that without paying any Academy fee or fully funded schooling is very unrealistic because highly experienced teachers will not be ready to provide learning free of cost
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which standards of learning will go down.
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, the government can't subsidize the full academic fees, especially in developing countries. Canada,
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, is one of the developed countries, but their state just
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off half of the tuition fees. In conclusion,
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schooling is a fundamental right and everyone is equally eligible to acquire it, I believe that a fully funded Academy free by the government is unpractical.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • lifelong education
  • continual learning
  • adapt
  • changing technologies
  • societal norms
  • cognitive function
  • cognitive decline
  • personal development
  • self-improvement
  • formal education
  • navigate
  • emphasis
  • pressure
  • contentment
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