The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summariae the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summariae the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summariae the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first line graph compares the proportion of
housholds
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households
in terms of six kinds of electrical appliances between 1920 and 2019,
while
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the second graph describes the average time they spent on housework.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there was an increasing trend in the number of washing
machine
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machines
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,
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refrigerator
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refrigerators
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, and vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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.
However
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, the number of hours continuously decreased. Looking at the
frist
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first
chart in more
deatil
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detail
, the figure for
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the refrigerator
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refrigerator
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refrigerators
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was the lowest in 1920, with nearly 8%, but it reached its peak at 100% over a 60-year period. In
next
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the next
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39 years, the percentages
maintained
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remained
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at the same level.
Moreover
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, after 2000, every family must
had
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have
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a vacuum cleaner, which had the same situation
with
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as
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refrigerator
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a refrigerator
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. In 1920, the proportion of washing
machin
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machine
was the highest, about 40%.
However
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, it was surpassed by
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refrigerator
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refrigerators
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around 1945, and
be
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apply
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overtaken by vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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in 1960. About the second line graph, the amount of time consistently
delinced
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declined
delinked
, standing at 10
hour
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hours
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per week in 2019.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words refrigerator with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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