The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
number
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of 5 mobile phone brands that sold their products from 2006 to 2012.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Nokia dominated each year, except for the
last
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year
,
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when Samsung became the highest
number
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. In 2006, Nokia sold around 350
million
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phones
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, gradually increasing to 475
million
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.
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, it decreased moderately and returned to around 300
million
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in 2012. Samsung had a stable increase. Only 117
million
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were sold in 2006, and in the next 2 years, more than 200
million
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products were sold. In the final year, they sold almost 400
million
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phones
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. In all periods, Ericsson became the lowest. Below 75
million
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were bought. They significantly grew to more than 100
million
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before dropping exponentially until the
last
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period, when only 28
million
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were sold.
This
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also
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happened with Motorola, even though in 2006 they sold more than 210
million
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, making it the
second,
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below Nokia. Starting
then
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, the
number
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of products sold consistently dropped to the same amount as Ericsson in 2012. Apple started to sell their
phones
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in 2007, with only 2,3
million
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phones
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bought by people. Apple's
number
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had
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escalated since
then
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, and in 2012, it sold more than 100
million
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phones
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million, phones with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual sales
  • fluctuations
  • market saturation
  • technological advancements
  • consumer trends
  • brand dominance
  • growth trajectory
  • market share
  • innovations
  • peak sales
  • decline
  • stagnate
  • proliferate
  • exponential growth
  • market dynamics
  • forecast
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