The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.

The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.
The line chart shows data on acid rain emissions in the UK from four different fields from 1990 to 2007, calculated in millions of
tonnes
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, electricity, gas and water supply decreased dramatically during 18
years
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and crossed paths with other industries.
Thereafter
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, transport and communication were unstable.
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, domestic emissions
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decreased vastly. Based on the data, electricity, gas and water supply were the highest in 1991 at 3.5
million
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tonnes
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, meanwhile, in the next 16
years
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, they declined significantly to 0.5
million
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tonnes
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, the other industries dropped slightly in 2
years
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from 2 to around 1.5
million
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tonnes
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, afterwards, they collapsed gradually 12
years
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later at approximately 1
million
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tonnes
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, transport and communication was lower than 2 other sectors. By 1991, they started at roughly under 1
million
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tonnes
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they outstripped electricity, gas and water supply in 2003 and reached their peak in 2005 at 1
million
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tonnes
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, the domestic emission was the lowest sector, initiated at almost 0.5
million
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tonnes
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and decreased substantially from 1995 to 2007.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "thereafter".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, years, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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