The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates how money was allocated
into
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different areas by families every week in two specific
year
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years
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of
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apply
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1968 and 2018.
Overall
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, expenditure on housing, transport and leisure witnessed an upward trend,
while
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the opposite was true for the remaining needs.
Additionally
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, most
income
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was spent on food in 1968 but switched to leisure in 2018. Looking at the three areas which accounted for the most weekly expenditure, 35% of the family spending per week fell into food in 1968 before contracting by 10% in 2018. For transport and leisure,
although
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the proportion of money spent on these sectors was similar at around 7% in 1968, which
then
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went to nearly 15% and over 20% in 2018, respectively. Concerning other basic needs which made up for lower percentages of the weekly
income
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, these
number
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ranged around 6% in 1968, with clothing and
footware
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footwear
standing out with 10% of the
income
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per week. The figures for fuel and power
as well as
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clothing and
footware
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footwear
and personal goods
then
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dropped to 3% and 5% and 3% by 2018, in that order.
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, household goods
was
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the only area to remain stable in both years, at approximately 8% of the weekly
income
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • marriage rate
  • family size
  • birth rate
  • cultural factors
  • economic factors
  • social structures
  • demographics
  • parental leave
  • childcare support
  • population growth
  • statistical data
  • comparative analysis
  • trends
  • outliers
  • nuclear family
  • extended family
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