The two maps illustrate how a supermarket has changed over the past five years

The two maps illustrate how a supermarket has changed over the past five years
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps illustrate how a supermarket has changed over the past five years
Both maps show the changes in supermarkets over five years.
Overall
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, a huge difference between both markets is size and replacing every product
as well as
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adding new things like self-checkouts and new consumerism products. Five years ago, there was one entrance and exit;
in
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contrast
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all checkout services were in front of the exit. Customers can find all organic food on the right side of the additional frozen foods located at the left top corner. Fresh products were situated in the middle, but carts were near the entrance.
On the other hand
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nowadays
as a result
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there have been lots of changes and replaces
such
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as checkouts which were reduced and replaced with self-checkout and fresh outputs moved to the top of the market
furthermore
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they added a new exit and some carts,
however
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main consumerism products didn't moved. In a
conclusion
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supermarket changed significantly
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a good way

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrate
  • changed
  • supermarket
  • expansion
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • enhanced customer experience
  • delicatessen
  • relocation
  • check-out area
  • centralized position
  • congestion
  • fresh produce
  • adaptation
  • consumer preferences
  • organic foods
  • removal
  • product focus
  • market demands
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