An English-speaking friend wants to spend two weeks holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. You have to write a letter. In your letter, * offer to find somewhere for your friend to stay. * give advice as what to do and see in the area. * give information about what clothes to bring.

Dear Mark, I hope

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mail finds you well. I heard that you are planning to go to Surat, for two weeks I am so happy for you . For accommodation, you do not have to worry about it because my best friend Hardik lives alone in two BHK flats, so he will give you permission to stay with him and he will

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assist you when you need any help. There are so many places I suggest you visit like Dumas beach, the ancient fort and so on.

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do not come without trying the street food of Surat because it is very delicious and mouth-watering. I'm sure you remember it for a lifetime. The weather in Surat is completely opposite to Calgary because the normal Temperature is 25 degrees over there, so do not forget to bring light and comfortable clothes, and one more thing keep your body hydrated, so you do not feel low energy. Wishing you a wonderful trip in advance and contact me if you need any help. Thank you, Yours Lovingly, Hardik

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Consider organizing your ideas more clearly by separating each main point into distinct paragraphs, which may enhance the logical structure of your letter.

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You might want to elaborate a bit more on the places to visit or provide specific recommendations for street food to make your response more complete.

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The letter maintains a friendly tone throughout, which is suitable for writing to a friend.

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You included helpful information about the climate and what clothes to bring, which adds practical value to your letter.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

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