A friend has told you that he or she feels lonely in their new city away from their family. Write to your friend, and •Explain why people can feel this way •Give some ideas on how to solve the problem •Ask your friend to contact you and tell you if this works

Hi Alex, It's been ages since we caught up, I've been thinking about you a lot lately. Remember our countless fun, the

advantures

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advantages

, and the memories we've created together? Those moments always

brings

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bring

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smile

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a smile

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to my face. I got a text from Sam that you feel lonely in

new

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a new

the new

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city. I know it's a huge change and moving away from family and friends in

whole

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a whole

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new city is challenging.

This

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was happen

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happened

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with

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me when I moved away for international studies in 2020, but I can give you some ideas

how

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on how

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you can feel better.

Firstly

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, try to find a job in

this

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way you could be able to make new

friend

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friends

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circle.

Secondly

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, join some city

activies

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activities

and take part in

voluntree

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volunteer

service.

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will educate you

alot

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about

a lot

new skills. Try to socialise with people, I can give you

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a gurantee

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gurantee

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guarantee

that you will feel

alot

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a lot

better and yes, don't forget to tell me if

this

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works. I'm looking

foward

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forward

to hearing from you soon. yours lovingly, Tina

shubhdeepkaur2Tue May 13 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Consider organizing your ideas into clearer paragraphs, one for each point you want to make.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to use appropriate connectors to improve the flow of your letter.

task achievement

Be mindful of spelling and grammatical accuracy, particularly with words like 'friends,' 'activities,' and 'voluntary.'

task achievement

You express genuine concern for your friend's feelings and provide thoughtful suggestions.

task achievement

The friendly and supportive tone of the letter is very engaging.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

168 words

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