You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. In your letter tell him/her of the incorrect information give him/her the correct inf ormation explain why they should correct it.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my concern about some misinformation, which I have encountered

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reading "The Land of the East" third edition, where some events in the book are related to the Hail region. As a former resident of Hail, I would like to request rectifying some information and share some insights related to the area. The description of the demographic picture of the city is incorrect,

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was narrated as a vast desert region dismissing its natural diversity.

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, Hail is surrounded by a range of magnificent hills and valleys, which was misinterpreted in the context of the book.

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, the residents of the town are predominantly farmers unlike what was mentioned.

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, there are certain errors with reference to the leaders of the city at that time. Meanwhile, I can provide you with sources from within the town that actually preserve ancient scripts, which document many of the historical and geographic parameters of the area. I believe that adding accurate information will not only enhance the credibility of the book but

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help readers gain an insight into the splendid nature and diversity of the region, which co-relates with the flow of the story making it even more enticing to the readers. I hope my request and recommendations are considered favourably. Yours faithfully, Dan Nam

dr.waffa1459Sat May 17 2025

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Task Response

Consider providing more specific examples or data to strengthen your argument about the incorrect information, especially regarding the demographic picture and leadership.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph clearly focuses on a single idea; for example, the last paragraph can delve deeper into the implications of the misinformation.

Task Achievement

The letter has a clear and polite tone appropriate for communication with an author.

Coherence and Cohesion

The structure of the letter is logical, with a clear beginning, body, and closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

224 words

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